Do you like this poem I wrote about Australia?

At the Highschool I go to, I major in Creative Writing. We are told that a good piece of writing, can usually help the reader feel as if they are there, or watching. Sometimes even playing the role of the character themselves. After reading your poem, you have done a very good job at accomplishing the feeling, sights, sounds, tastes, and even smells of Australia. I feel like I have been there in a way. Overall, I would give this poem 7 out of 10. Good Job, and keep it up.